Several things I noticed, a few being clearly errata... some not. I got the PDF yesterday
Errata-ish
p79: "Good Quality Swords have one Qualities." Should be "Good Quality Swords have one Quality."
p91: §Escalation ¶1 Talks only about lowering the war rank with actions, not raising it, but the last line implies you can intentionally raise it.
p20-21 doesn't mention clan bonus. Also, if one were silly enough to put their W in the Clan's favored virtue, would they get a 1 or keep the W.
p24: example lists the clan's "(+1)" but doesn't explain it...
Just plain WTF:
p103: just one of those WTF moments... Really now... John, can you please explain "ADFOIAHPOIHWVPAHDSPGHASPOVNPANVPAURGPOHRGPOH!!!!" or at least give us an audio? «Grin»«Duck»«run»
p104: "Gay marriage. Okay, that one’s pretty straight-forward, it’s just that the people on the other side of the debate are ignorant and don’t understand the real issues."
Some things are just better left unsaid...
p115: "(Nobody cares about a game because the ranged attack mechanic is cool.)" John, have you ever met Phoenix Command or TNE players? They do... and I used to. (I grew out of it).
